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interesting concept, enjoyed watching the particles make and break other up. 

my major gripe is that as it is this is another game where the prestige system feels like a bolt -on, or a useless appendage. 

also the problem with autosaving and the name blank is frustrating. 

it even stacks apon itself

prestige is meaningless, within a few minutes i had everything and was earning 100T per second. prestiged and got everything all at once.

EDIT: side point, I missed when games told you what they were with minimal embellishing. "Factory optimization challenge" my man, optimization implies choosing the best of diverse options, not choosing between +1 or +6
"strategic upgrades".... its a tech tree. theres no choice there, just sooner or later. 

EDIT2: I see, created with AI, guessing the blurb was AI generated too

great little demo, only complaint i could make, and its a small one. is that you never really get to enjoy gobbling stuff up, because larger means hunger drains faster. Still an absolutely solid demo

the sound affects for rats and you attacking are too loud, and is TABERN meant to be TAVERN?

I think previous commenter was asking because 5A/5D means you just loop killing rats forever, since they cant hurt you.

interesting game, although considering the early information density I'm not sure I would show things you cant actually make 2-3 researches before they become available

broke even at 281 days remaining by just selling high with everything at 100%.

had 10 mil + at day 211. 

The game is a little easy, and while i get the humour of the alarms being incredibly annoying... they are still incredibly annoying.

Nothing shows up for staff under extra cost's, even when one is actually sick.

some of the production information is stuck at 0 throughout the game. repair costs(total), Average saleprice per barrel and average production effeciency.

interesting concept, although I wouldnt say it was a "game" yet. 

the "powers" you can activate or far too cheap/short cooldown.

Seems interesting though. Would be interested in trying it again after its had more time to cook.

EDIT:added a 4 star review to counter the single wierd 1 star without a review

aspect ratio for computer is off, looks like for mobile and so the writing is very small and cramped.
EDIT: trying to do NPC and instead of getting the janitor it mentioned in the prompt i got a loan underwriter, and now no matter what the NPC prompt says it just returns to him. also searching heals you so do you even need the rest prompt?

Tried it again and it hasnt really changed, I even recieved the same prompt twice in the six parts. getting the "break out/ barracade in" as the first 1/6 and THEN prompts like settling in and you notice something is wrong makes no sense. 

Great, that number was really bugging me, look forward to future updates

feels like the text is AI generated, they rarely match what you choose, and the story is wrong most of the time. one time it starts with barracading yourself in/trying to escape, then convincing yourself nothing is wrong. also i got injured on a cucessful check to look for clues? huh? also the last part of the act was a look for clues, so i died from a failed awareness check for clues.

issue with description. says an outer disciple consumes 1 spirit stone a month and produces 1 spirit stone a month (for first realm) when it actually is consumes 1 a month and produces 1 a year, otherwise they would just pay for themselves
EDIT what does the number after realm (1-9) mean? when you hover over it just says how many spirit stones you produce.

the idea is interesting, but I think the execution needs a bit more cooking in the oven, also full screen doesnt resize the UI

I'm not sure where the game is in this. i didnt enjoy it personally.
No explanation for what fever does.
after 5-6 coins how does more coins help you? just seems like a waste of money to spread coins across the screen. 

considering two chapters is 66% of the content I feel its pretty fair to critique a game. just like comparing two similar games to better explain what I found dissatisfying about the game experience.

I told you what would make the game more enjoyable, and made more sense from a "time loop" perspective. that does not mean you have to agree or follow it, i simply offered my opinion.

while I have problems with games made by AI, my comment about AI wasnt the fact it was made in AI, but that all choices made in the game seemed the most generic possible (aka AI), which according to you, were the choices you personally made.

I assume the comment about the reply being made with the help of AI is a joke.

You seem to have a chip on your shoulder for doing.... not a lot. 
Sorry for my middle of the road essay about your middle of the raod game.

EDIT: rereading your comment I just wanted to say that calling another game a clone when you made your's in AI is a little insulting to someone who actually put hard work in writing the code themselves.

couldnt get past level 1, had 2 balls and all blocks were destroyed but it failed to move to next level

so ive played for a few hours, got to the end of chapter 2.

this is extremely middle of the road, and very obviously AI generated.
I think my major problem is this reminds me of terraformental and is worse in every respect in comparison. 

If i remember previous loops, why cant i get the code for the cryodoor to speed up its opening? if I know the chapter 2 door is to the north, why do i need to read the logs and then the map to get access to the door again. many of the 4/5 -> 5/5 choices offer nothing but a snippet of flavor text. Why are you offered the choice to re-decode something again, just for a small oxygen boost, instead of knwoing the decode already and getting a smaller task to access that oxygen. 

it's like you chose every option to make this game more grindy and less enjoyable. 

Hidden achivements remain ??? after unlocking... so i have no idea what i did.
as far as i can tell the "optimal" strategy is just to swarm from the start the enemy base, no real tactics are involved even with additional rallies. the prestige system seems superflous.

the game didnt save progress for me. after closing the browser and then coming back later.

game seems alright I guess. not sure I would consider it a 'game' yet though. will check back when the game is more feature complete

the tooptip says 50% diamonds lost. and im also not sure. which is why i suggested it might be a rounding error. 

great game so far, two issues to bring up one minor one slightly less minor
1: the very first rebirth, i was left with 34 diamonds. seems like a rounding error
2: everytime the galactic ball emerges the ball dropping screen glitches out, either going blank or the interface spinning round real fast
EDIT Three: Apparently completely resetting my browser has fixed the issue :D
EDIT: the picture of the galactic ball on the rarity list is the paper n pen instead of the ball, so it doesnt seem to be able to load it
EDIT Two:

very short but enjoyable for 5 minutes i guess

I cant actually see how long i have because the screen ratio's are off.

the multipliers for books dont seem to effect the score that much? i found just stacking normal books gave me the best score.

needs the progression to be smoothed out, faster first round and slower later rounds, potentially offering a prestige reward before 3 rounds are done. an upgrade to make auto cursors choose domino's better instead of just random would also be good. having the auto push upgrade cheaper would also be a good idea (1000?).

When I think domino's i think large lines collapsing so this felt a little underwhelming with only 3 at the start and 7 by time the i lost interest. 

was about to comment the same, my passive income advanced upgrade stopped working as soon as i prestiged. intersting game otherwise

im so sad that the score doesnt go up very fast so i cant see myself getting millions of points for a customer that demands 400 ish points :(

first time i tried to join my anti virus blocked it for phishing... which i dont really believe. and the second time it just says "connection was reset"

Interesting idea for a game. I like it, 

Alphabet tree didnt seem to self fertilize though after hitting 50.

As a game, 5/10 a little boring.
as a proof of concept FOR a game. 10/10 super interesting, looking forward to what you do

too much on the screen with 0 explanation of what any of it does.

4/10

having any upgrade that softlocks the game is a bad game. 

good game, but far too easy, and putting healing on the wheel is just meaningless when you heal after every fight. (yes i know some builds can use healing... but again, the game is too easy for it too matter)
I did 2 runs and i dont think i lost even 10hp over the fights in a single run.

I have complaints about the game but that doesnt take away from the fact this game is an easy 9/10. as other comments have said, i love the almost tactile sensation of the dice rolls, the wheel spinning, and the credits getting spat out. this game has to be the personification of "simple is perfection".

great pacing for the game, all the upgrades feel meaningful.
the gem scaling for upgrades hits just right.
the mimic gamble is great, although i found there wasnt really a downside to it. the mimic still gave gold so you barely missed out
I got lucky with the final boss with 3 crits meaning i didnt even need to buy the last few HP upgrades.
I would love a longer sequel.

overall: 8/10 (would be 9 if it had some fitting music/sound effects)

crashed the first time i prestiged. 
looked good up to that.
The screen showed everything pre-prestige (miners gold pile goblins etc) and then crashed

had an issue on first load up of the game that had WASD and arrow keys not working, but a refresh fixed it

game is great. you have a great balance scaling income and upgrades as you progress further. look forward to seeing more when the game comes out!

minor spelling mistake on final conversation (affraid double f)